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*~A Promise Keep~*

Rising gently, I watch it fall
On your chest, a lifeless doll
I stay awake, we fall asleep
On each other, A Promise Keep


You say I'm yours, I say your mine
I listen to the church bells chime
I say your mine, it does not reach
You say your hers, A Promise Keep


I lay awake on my bed
Feeling like Iím oh so dead
My love for you is oh so deep
Always forever, A Promise Keep

You came knocking at my door
To borrow something, nothing more
You think Iím sleeping, counting sheep
Dreaming of you, A Promise Keep


You open the door and then you find
A hanging body, that is mine
To your horror, I was asleep
On my ceiling, A Promise Keep


Your on your knees, flowing tears
You know you loved me, for so many years
Up to my body, you started to creep
You reminisce, A Promise Keep


When we were young, in our past
You loved me, held me, made it last
In private, without a peep
We exchanges rings, A Promise Keep


We were small, still played with toys
It didnít matter, that we were boys
What was gender, compared to how deep
I wanted you, A Promise Keep


I loved you once, I loved you twice
Iíd love you always, love for life
You said the same, then kissed my cheek
When we made love, A Promise Keep


Our bodies we tired, and intertwined
You screwed out my brain, you screwed out my mind
My heart was pounding, I could not believe
That you were mine, A Promise Keep


The blood, the tears, the sheets we stained
That night I felt the best of pain
The love, the pain, the sweat-stained sheets
Thatís all I wanted, A Promise Keep


You found it strange, to be with me
That didnít matter, canít you see
Then came a girl, your love fell weak
But remember that time, A Promise Keep


I came into the house, and looked in the room
You were with her, my heart was in doom
I cried so long, then came to think
Your love for me has died, A Promise Keep


You told me once, you told me twice
You said youíd love me all your life
But here I swing, dangling feet
I love you still, A Promise Keep


You took me down, blood stained hands
I still donít think you understand
Why did I dangle from above
I died for you, I died for love


A Promise Never Kept
*~Kizuna~*
Yes! Kizzy writes peotry! Although Im not very good of it....I thought I could give it a try. and if people like it and want to hear more, i'll gladly do more ^o^ but if hardly anyone reviews then...ya..i'll stop XD. I worked on this fum 1st to second period. it took me afew hours to finish XD. so far i got good reviews form people at my school, so please...Enjoy! ^o^ *pssst, Kizzy also writes yaoi fanfiction XD*
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amypond91 Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2014  Hobbyist
Wow im gonna go cry now. but seriuosly that was so awesome and jjust amazing
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DemYaois Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
My God......so beautiful.....I'm so moved....
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2DxMurdocfangirl Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2013
i-i'm just gunna go cry in a corner... .sobs in said corner.
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blackshadow9897 Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2013
im gonna go cry in a corner. Bulbasaur Crying ever my bulbasaur's sad.
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villiantimewleeannn Featured By Owner Sep 2, 2013  Professional General Artist
WAAAAAAAAH! noooooooez! dont do it my goth girl eeyeliner is ruined! ruined i say< RUINed nooooez poor yaoi its so saaad, but sooo goooooooddd....... *sob*
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Kau-chan Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2013
I love it. It's so sad and and cute and... OMG I Cried
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kyugi12345 Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
HOLY CRAP awesomeness...well not the death part but..y'know...oh god let me shut up and enjoy the poetry
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MagentaAlchemist13 Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
*Almost crying*
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Scootie-chan Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
So sad and beautiful~ TwT
I love those that move the heart most like this~<3
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Card-Meister Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
(( >< So many different feelings. I don't know whether to love this because its amazing, or hate it cuz it reminds me of my best friend's relationship. :'D Either way, good job! ))
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