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+A Promise Keep+ YAOI by =Kizzy-chan:iconKizzy-chan:





*~A Promise Keep~*

Rising gently, I watch it fall
On your chest, a lifeless doll
I stay awake, we fall asleep
On each other, A Promise Keep


You say I'm yours, I say your mine
I listen to the church bells chime
I say your mine, it does not reach
You say your hers, A Promise Keep


I lay awake on my bed
Feeling like I’m oh so dead
My love for you is oh so deep
Always forever, A Promise Keep

You came knocking at my door
To borrow something, nothing more
You think I’m sleeping, counting sheep
Dreaming of you, A Promise Keep


You open the door and then you find
A hanging body, that is mine
To your horror, I was asleep
On my ceiling, A Promise Keep


Your on your knees, flowing tears
You know you loved me, for so many years
Up to my body, you started to creep
You reminisce, A Promise Keep


When we were young, in our past
You loved me, held me, made it last
In private, without a peep
We exchanges rings, A Promise Keep


We were small, still played with toys
It didn’t matter, that we were boys
What was gender, compared to how deep
I wanted you, A Promise Keep


I loved you once, I loved you twice
I’d love you always, love for life
You said the same, then kissed my cheek
When we made love, A Promise Keep


Our bodies we tired, and intertwined
You screwed out my brain, you screwed out my mind
My heart was pounding, I could not believe
That you were mine, A Promise Keep


The blood, the tears, the sheets we stained
That night I felt the best of pain
The love, the pain, the sweat-stained sheets
That’s all I wanted, A Promise Keep


You found it strange, to be with me
That didn’t matter, can’t you see
Then came a girl, your love fell weak
But remember that time, A Promise Keep


I came into the house, and looked in the room
You were with her, my heart was in doom
I cried so long, then came to think
Your love for me has died, A Promise Keep


You told me once, you told me twice
You said you’d love me all your life
But here I swing, dangling feet
I love you still, A Promise Keep


You took me down, blood stained hands
I still don’t think you understand
Why did I dangle from above
I died for you, I died for love


A Promise Never Kept
*~Kizuna~*
©2004-2009 =Kizzy-chan
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Submitted: August 25, 2004
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Yes! Kizzy writes peotry! Although Im not very good of it....I thought I could give it a try. and if people like it and want to hear more, i'll gladly do more ^o^ but if hardly anyone reviews then...ya..i'll stop XD. I worked on this fum 1st to second period. it took me afew hours to finish XD. so far i got good reviews form people at my school, so please...Enjoy! ^o^ *pssst, Kizzy also writes yaoi fanfiction XD*
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;_; KIZZY!!!!!!!!! that was so good :cries: that was so very good I can almost feel the pain of that little boy ;_; so very good doi8ble thumbs up kizzy

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That was awesome O_______________________________________ _O *stares at you with mouth hanging open*

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YAY! MY FIRST REVIEW! :glomp: im so glad you like it! and thank you so much for the fave! ^o^ yay! I worked so hard on it, I guess it paid off!! ^o^ SQUEE!

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>;)Hmmm...Yes...I see...So, I see it was you, wasnt it Mr. Oragatang? GIVE ME BACK MY HORSE RADDISH YOU SON OF A SQUEELING RAKE MONKEY!!! >(
hahaa XD YAY! ANOTHER GREAT COMMENT AND A FAVE!! :glomp: :glomp: Thanks you so much!!! It means ALOT to me! ^o^

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>;)Hmmm...Yes...I see...So, I see it was you, wasnt it Mr. Oragatang? GIVE ME BACK MY HORSE RADDISH YOU SON OF A SQUEELING RAKE MONKEY!!! >(
hahaa XD YAY! ANOTHER GREAT COMMENT AND A FAVE!! :glomp: :glomp: Thanks you so much!!! It means ALOT to me! ^o^

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>;)Hmmm...Yes...I see...So, I see it was you, wasnt it Mr. Oragatang? GIVE ME BACK MY HORSE RADDISH YOU SON OF A SQUEELING RAKE MONKEY!!! >(
oh god!!! Kizzy!! i love this!O.O very sad and heartwarming...*sniffles and claps*

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heheheh your welcome anytimne ^^ you need to write my poetry ^_^ 'cause I loved it O_O

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hee hee yay! :glomp: :glomp: :glomp: :w00t: I feel so good! ^o^ Im glad you like it so much! My frend even said he wanted cry lmao XD thanks for the fave also! so far everyone who left me a comment faved it! YAY! XD

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>;)Hmmm...Yes...I see...So, I see it was you, wasnt it Mr. Oragatang? GIVE ME BACK MY HORSE RADDISH YOU SON OF A SQUEELING RAKE MONKEY!!! >(
heheh well it's THAT good!=3 a love relationship that invloves death is very depressing..i know because my rp mate died aswell..ffffft!

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Really good, I only don't like the mantra "a promise keep" it's kind of goofy, but otherwise very nice.

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